I was going to do a post on restructuring your draft, but then I found a link to this nice, succinct gem. Go read it. It’s what I wanted to say anyway.
There’s a good story there, it just needs to be shaped and polished to bring that story out and put the protag back in the narrative driver’s seat.
via The Other Side of the Story: Shake and Bake: Re-Structuring Your Novel.
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