I’ve got a short story that’s in the final draft stage before submission. The deadline is the end of the month. My crit group have already picked over it, but I’m looking for fresh eyes.
It’s science fiction, but not overly technical. It’s mostly a character story.
If you can spare the time for a read and review, I will certainly return the favour for a short story or novel chapter you need feedback on.
Drop me a line at m dot faber at iinet dot net dot au if you can help.
This is, finally, the follow-up post to The Yin-Yang of Writing. I previously asked for examples of criticism from readers, and received some really useful comments, which I shall use here. I’ll also be presenting examples from my own experience.
I’m going to stick to criticism of fiction, because non-fiction is a little different, and doesn’t apply to most of my readers anyway.
You get the most out of criticism when you look behind the words.
Someone once sent me the following crit:
Beautiful writing. So what?
I’m sure you can imagine my younger self; the indignity, the fuck-you-buddy. So what? SO WHAT? It was beautiful! You’re just too crass and ignorant to appreciate it!